As I lay back and close my eyes i feel like I'm spinning this is perhaps true to my life anyway. I feel as if I'm never going to stop. I open my eyes and see a bug, crawling without a care. No where to go no reason to be ashamed.
i like how you say that you envy a bug. life is to short to worry about everything like drama and who doesnt like who i wish i could get away from this little town. oh wait i am.
4 comments:
Superior! I don't see how an insect has no reason to care where it goes. I think we need more poetic detail on that. Good job.
i like the poem even if it didnt have a poetic thigy goin on...really good poem
i like how you say that you envy a bug. life is to short to worry about everything like drama and who doesnt like who i wish i could get away from this little town. oh wait i am.
nice, i liked the bug and how you envy it. good job and keep it up
Post a Comment